Wednesday, September 24, 2008
Horses in kansas
This is my horse i call her ice cream because of her color shes white. So like vanilla ice cream or like snow itself its white. This is what kansas means to me horse racing. she is a race horse she has won 3 races in a row. There are many things to do in kansas but horse racing is the one thing that i enjoy. There is a track near my house there are races there every weekend. This isnt a professional track its just a place to go have fun but it has features of a professional track. There are lots of people that attend these events it gets really exciting. Kansas is a boring place not much happens here you have to create your own fun. The fun that i have is horse racing.
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this is a really cool description. I would love to have a track near my house. sentences like "she is a race horse she has one 3 races in a row" needs commas and spell out numbers under 100. you could write about the features of your horse more to make the reader appreciate the actual racing more. This essay makes me think that kansas is a fun place where you can go horse racing.
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